Awesome video Matt, I love the way you articulated you essay and the pictures were stunning.
Excellent job Matt. One of the first things I noticed about the video was that instead of reading, you were talking, which is something that I really liked to hear. Also, I really liked how different your intoduction and endings were from most people's. I can tell you put lots of effort into this project, and you should be proud of the result.
Great job matt I love the beginning where you say Henry david Thoreau: interesting, complex,natural. (you used the comma rules) Overall I think you did a great job on this essay and video. I like to use of the insertion quotes. I like how you sounded like you were just talking about it instead of reading off of a script. If I were to say one bad thing I would say that there is an echo in the background but this can be fixed just by moving to another room. You did a great job on this and you should be proud.
Great Job. Your narration is unscripted and silky smooth, and your flow was nearly uninterrupted.
I love the title and your first sentence that bring desctiption to Thoreau. You spoke very clearly and all your paragraphs were strong. Nice job! The person that pressed the record button did an awesome job too.
Nice Job Matt. The intro was great and I found it to be different from all the others.I liked how you talked about getting in the zone when you were writing at walden.
Great job Matt, this was a long and powerful video essay. The timing of the pictures worked and the time you spent on this is clear. Nice job Matt.
I know you did not feel this was a good video, but it really is! You have a heartfelt honesty that is compelling and interesting.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.